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Thursday, November 25, 2021

Asttle - Narrative Writing

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING

The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

In a land far far away there lived a king and the king knights they lived in a castle but one of the king nights told the king that they spotted the evil witches army running towards the wau but the king had a problem he had one knight so the one knight sacrfis hes saf so the king kan have mor time runing away from the evil witches army the king got away from the army but he hrde a rore so he folod the rore but he he blood he sor a bare etling one of the witches sogrs the bare was runing to the king so the king lore his hed but the king night jups on a roce and stabs the bare in the eays night was bleding so the king book that can summon a jenny that can sumin 3 first wish healing the night and to ceod the wichs army and lived happily ever after.